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Final
We added color, softening the contrast overall to give it
a more "weathered" look. We then added interior
color and decoration to the letterforms to make them even
more obnoxious. We offset a red copy of our man in order to
make it a little jarring, added decorative elements in the
corners to increase dynamism, and threw some big chunky icons
in the background to make the composition more playful and
contemporary. Last but not least, we "broke" the
finger of the pointing hand (that quintessential Victorian
icon) after the word "starts" just to underscore
the message of the quote that much more. The loud type, broken
forms, and scattered icons all create a feeling of "breaking
down" that fits this quote perfectly.
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