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Final
We made our opening line larger and dramatically looming (cue Darth Vader theme). We made our second line dance—literally. This helps break up the static nature of the page and integrate the type with the image. We brightened up the blue in the type to increase legibility. Lastly, we worked on tightening up the composition by cropping a little here, moving type a little there, and making sure everything worked as a unified whole. Next time life throws you a little rain, get out there and dance!
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